The International Food Fair article(final composition):
The International Food Fair was organized on 7th of December, 2007 at Methodist College. It was organized by The Food Fair is a big festival in Methodist College. The Food Fair is an eating party for the form one students. The form two students sold the international food to the form one students. The form two students decided to have this festival because all the money raised from the sale will go to the charity which is 'Doctors without borders'.
Overall, most of the students who have joined the Food Fair thought it is meaningful because they can help people who need their help and they felt happy and enjoyable after selling all the food to the form one students. And they make out how to map out the things in the Food Fair. They also learnt to be cooperate after preparing for the Food Fair. All students learnt more in this excellent experience!
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Ok, Samuela, the article covered all of the relevant topics.
The first paragraph was a bit choppy; certain ideas could have been combined into one sentence.
Check your tenses; this stuff happened in the past.
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